Thursday, May 29, 2008

beginning of new story-Susan's Kidnapping by Cheryl V.

SUSAN’S KIDNAPPING
BACKFLASH:
After Andy’s brother committing suicide over at his cottage, one day, and Cher Bear having died of an injection of Morphine while in the hospital after having had a seizure, they both came back from dead. And when Susan bumped into them both, one morning, she, almost, had a miscarriage. However being that Mike, after coming back to life, was part angel, he was able to stop Susan from having a miscarriage through some angel work.
Then, Andy and Susan ended up getting married a few months later, and having a baby, little Michael, however then, Andy’s brother, Mike, lied to Andy, one time, about him and Susan having been in bed together, and then, getting fresh with each other. So, being Susan overheard the white lie which Mike told Andy, she, then, got desperate, and couldn’t trust Mike anymore in being afraid, that he has been trying to ruin Susan’s marriage with Andy. Also, she got the wrong idea, that Andy, simply, believed Mike’s white lie because he didn’t trust Susan anymore. So, then, Susan felt that she had to take the baby being that if she didn’t, she was afraid that Andy would fight for custody of the baby jus because she got that feeling, he has been losing trust in his marriage with her.
PROLOGUE:
Andy thought that his marriage with Susan, was going along very well until that one night on which Susan took off with their baby, little Michael. She escaped out a window on the second floor, and, somehow, she managed to get down a rope with the baby in one arm. Then, after reaching the ground, she took in a red Chevy without either Andy or his brother, Mike, knowing about it, right away
After a couple of hours of driving, Susan, really, felt she’s getting hungry. So, then, she stopped at a restaurant on the way, and upon her getting out of her car, pushed her way into the restaurant with the baby.
Susan’s thinking, “I wonder if Mike or Andy has realized yet, that I’ve left with the baby. They, probably, are, still, cooking dinner, yet, and are waiting for Cher Bear to show up to come over and seek Mike, although, she’s in mourning over her friend, having, recently, died.”
Andy couldn’t figure out why Susan hasn’t come down yet to eat dinner as she knows very well when dinner’s ready. So, he said to Mike, “You start serving dinner, putting it all on the table, and I’ll run upstairs and see what’s taking Susan, as she’s, usually, at dinner by now.”
So, then, Andy, actually, ran upstairs, and while he’s doing so, he, also, can’t figure out why the baby has been so quiet as it, usually, wakes up easy at night, especially, during its feeding time which has come around. As Andy reached the top of the stairs, and walked in his and Susan’s bedroom, he’s very surprised to find out, that both Susan and the baby are missing from the bedroom. So, then, he proceeded over to Mike’s bedroom, and checked in there, but neither the baby nor Susan were in there either.
So, as he walked back into his and Susan’s bedroom, he jus happened to notice, that things like the baby mobile and all other baby things are missing from the crib. Also, upon checking the drawers in the room, especially, where Susan keeps all the baby clothes and her clothes too, he happened to notice with alarm, that whatever clothes belonged to Susan and the baby, also, were missing.
He didn’t know where to start looking for Susan and the baby, so, first, he ran down the stairs, and over to the dining room where Mike’s seated at the table, waiting for Andy and Susan and of course the baby. And as Andy arrived inside the dining room, Mike couldn’t help but notice that Andy’s fade is pale, and that he has tears in his eyes. So, Mike said desperately to Andy, “What’s going on; how come Susan and the baby aren’t with you?”
“I don’t know how to tell you this, Mike, but neither Susan nor the baby is anywhere upstairs, and Susan’s and the baby’s clothes and things seem to be missing. I can’t figure out how Susan managed to get away with little Michael without me even knowing about the situation. I wonder if it has been something, I said to her to night which got Susan upset; and then, made her desperate to try to run away with the baby without either one of us, knowing about it. I jus wonder if maybe she’s pregnant again, and couldn’t face me about the situation; and then, took off with the baby, so, I wouldn’t discover anything leading to the truth of whether she’s pregnant again or not.”
Then, Mike said to Andy, “I don’t know what to think either; I’m jus wondering if I, myself, said something to her or about her, tonight, to hurt her deeply enough, that she felt she had to take off with her baby.”
So, Andy said to him, “Well right after I’m done eating dinner, I’d better call the police, and have a missing person’s report made up on both the baby and Susan. I don’t know if this is the right thing to do, but I don’t know what else to do at this point. I have to rule out her and the baby, having been kidnapped because being that Susan’s former boyfriend, in the past, has pulled something drastic on her, he jus might be after her again.”
In the meantime, after Susan left the restaurant with the baby, she, then, didn’t know, exactly, where she could go at this time. So, she jus drove off with the baby beside her in his baby seat, and decided with whatever money, she has with her; she would stay in a motel for the time being. And then, hopefully, she could contact a member of her family or a friend to stay after she stayed over at the motel jus a few streets away in the city of Portville.
Jus as she was on her way to the motel, she jus happened to notice a grey Corvette behind her which seemed to be getting very close to her. Also, she noticed the guy with dark brown curly hair and a beard, looked very familiar to her. So, she, then, suddenly, got a scary feeling inside her to run for her life without being aware of why she’s feeling this way.
However as she’s driving, the guy in the Corvette behind her, started honking at her, so, suddenly, some bad thoughts came into her mind, so, she’s thinking, “Oh no, I’m feeling very afraid for my life. That guy in that car right behind me is honking at me because he recognizes, who I am. He’s my ex-boyfriend, the one who pulled that dirty trick on me in the past. Also, I ended up breaking up with when we were going steady jus because he had been treating me like dirt, and using me every inch of the way.”
So, Susan, quickly, grabbed onto her cell phone, setting right beside her, and called the police. As soon as a policeman answered his cell phone, she desperately, said to him, “Look now, I’m in deep trouble, some guy who I used to go steady with in the past is on the prowl. And he happens to be right behind me as I’m on the way over to a motel with my baby.”
“Okay,” said the policeman, “Try to settle down and tell me, all you can about this guy.”
“Well he has brown curly hair and a beard, and he’s about six feel tall, and I’ve known him in the past to be quite violent towards me. And when the two of us were going steady, I broke up with him jus because I realized, that he was using me for sex, and treating me like dirt. Then, after the two of us broke up, then, one time, he tried to kidnap me; however I got away from him through sneaking out a window over at his apartment. And ever since then, he kept calling me, at least, ten times, day and night, threatening to kill me, however a detective happened to place his calls, and arrested him. However it’s apparent, that he got out of jail, and is after me, again.”
However before she could say another word to the policeman, she got, really, scared, and dropped her cell phone on the floor of the car. And before she knew it, he has caught up to her, and started threatening her, “Hey, stop that car right now, or I am going to kill both you and the baby.”
In the meantime, Mike didn’t know how to respond to the situation of Susan, having left with the baby, of which Andy is the true father. And as soon as Andy’s through eating, he, immediately, rushed upstairs to find his cell phone which he found, lying on his bed. And upon finding it, he, then, lie on his bed while he called the police.
And as the Captain answered the cell phone, Andy, said to him, “Hello Captain, I’m in a desperate situation right now; upon going upstairs, a few minutes ago, I went to check on Susan and the baby, little Michael, to see why Susan wasn’t downstairs for dinner. Also, I have been curious as to why Susan hasn’t called me, upstairs, to let me know how the baby’s doing. And upon reaching upstairs, I checked out all the bedrooms to see if she’s sleeping or not, I couldn’t find her anywhere.”
“Okay, Andy, what’s really the matter here. Do you have any idea, why neither Susan nor the baby could be found jus now?”
“At least, I have one assumption at this point. I don’t know for sure, however I think that Susan’s ex-boyfriend could be on the prowl again. It’s very possible that he could have sneaked through the upstairs window, somehow, tonight, because I happened to find some ladder near that side of the house. Also, the bedroom seems to be like some stranger has been inside it, and it looks disheveled. Also, upon checking the baby crib and drawers, all the baby things including its clothes and Susan’s clothes seem to be missing too.”
‘Now do you happen to have any idea where Susan’s boyfriend is living or his place of work by chance?”
“I have no idea where he’s been working however I do know where he’s been living. And he jus happens to live in some apartment complex in Portville which isn’t far from where I work over at a clubhouse as a staff member. And if you need me for any reason, I’ll be glad to work undercover on this case until both my wife and baby are found. If I have to I’ll, simply, notify the manager over at the clubhouse, that I need to take a leave of absence from my job if necessary, to protect me from getting kidnapped to if that’s the case.”
“Jus a minute, here, Andy, holds the line. A policeman is trying to get my attention as he, apparently, has been talking on the phone.”
As the Captain saw a policeman, walking over to him, apparently, having jus come from his desk, the Captain said to him, “Yes, David, what is it? You seem to be desperate.”
“I jus got threw talking to a woman, Susan, and she happened to be on her way to a motel. Also, she sounded very desperate, and jus told me, that some guy, who used to be her ex-boyfriend, is following her at this time. However jus as she let me, knows that this guy played some dirty trick on her in the past, and used her and treated her like dirt, this guy is trying to get her to stop her car. However I lost contact with her, so, she must have gotten herself in a mess because it’s apparent, that her voice faded away on the line.”
‘It jus so happens that I’m talking to her husband right now, and he jus let me know, that he’s afraid that Susan’s ex-boyfriend is after her and her baby. Also, he has kidnapped her, once, so the woman, you jus talked to, is the one, Andy’s worried about. So, immediately, you and another cop get on the chase because the guy, who’s after her is right in the vicinity.”
So, then, the two cops grabbed whatever they needed for the chase, and took off from the police station on their way. And one of the cops has the most recent file related with the case with him.

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